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    Crysis.... :D

    Post by M.R. doodlezzz;x on Thu Apr 28, 2011 12:27 pm


    i think that is a little too mutch messy but im fine whit that x)

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    Post by BERKAY on Thu Apr 28, 2011 1:39 pm

    Bubble Effect C4D really needless here. Also background color doesn't fit with theme. Abstract C4D doesn't fit with flow. And yes, it looks messy. :S
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    Post by The Crocodile on Fri Apr 29, 2011 4:59 pm

    Yep a bit messy :/
    You may synchronize it a bit more. You cant say what is in 1st what in 2nd there, you made only the last yellow colored bg as 3rd plan. You could blur some of the effect C4Ds to make the render a bit bulged. Thats my opinion.
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    Post by Darkneji12 on Sat Apr 30, 2011 5:47 am

    @berkay the abstract is fine the right side of the abstract is distracting.
    dude use ps o.o im serious i can help u more.. dont focus effects on everything. get rid of ALL the bubbles and effect c4ds and keep the abstract.. use like 2 fracticals behind the render for a nice light and add a lightsource, and kill ur BG
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    Post by M.R. doodlezzz;x on Sat Apr 30, 2011 10:16 am

    as far as i can remember bg doesent have to fit whit a render...
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    Post by The Crocodile on Sat Apr 30, 2011 1:21 pm

    might be that it doesnt have to, but if it doesnt fit, the picture wont look as good as with a suitable bg
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    Post by Darkneji12 on Sat Apr 30, 2011 3:44 pm

    M.R. doodlezzz;x wrote:as far as i can remember bg doesent have to fit whit a render...
    hes high .____.
    dude if u dont have a good background then ur sig isnt good.. it has to fit with the render
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    Post by Anzo on Sat Apr 30, 2011 6:26 pm

    In general it gives a good idea about it , you could pick a good C4D and BG .. still you didn't fit them with your render , try to Adjust them little bit using Adjustments effects and some -blur- effects. Keep it up.

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