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    Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Wed Apr 27, 2011 6:18 am

    Here's some of my noob works from long ago.......within this month. Very Happy





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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Supreme_King on Wed Apr 27, 2011 12:36 pm

    Love the first one, 9.5/10 from me on that.
    The 2nd background is kinda simple, so I give it an 8/10. KIU Frosty Wink




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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by BERKAY on Wed Apr 27, 2011 1:41 pm

    You should work about lightning and focal point. KIU

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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by AntiPervert on Wed Apr 27, 2011 1:57 pm

    1st one really love it
    2nd i feel the background is really suitable for the fossil dyna :O

    btw berkay arent you signature a bit like , something pedo?
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Sat Apr 30, 2011 6:14 am

    Here's one I made to day while trying out a new style:

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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by The Crocodile on Sat Apr 30, 2011 1:16 pm

    Its good but i dont like that style, for me its better when it has a real background which suits the character. Yours is like when choosing a character in some game or loading screen of a game. IMO the colors you used for the bg are cool, the lil effects do some make up on the picture too, but pay attention at your string. It goes through her stomach and not around her Very Happy
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Sun May 01, 2011 3:34 am

    Actually the string isn't going the the stomach, I used the dodge tool on that area, but it came out a bit wrong. Anyways, like I said, it's a test of a new style, since my old style was boring.

    EDIT: My latest work, as it says in the sig, it's my first try at smudge. It may be too sharp, but without sharpening the render looks way too blurry. Comment pls.

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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Yusei on Sun May 01, 2011 11:15 am

    i love the 2nd one
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Anzo on Sun May 01, 2011 11:46 am

    I see you always use filters and the same font , and maybe place your renders in the same way. Try to create something new .. have you thought about C4Ds or Adjustments effects ?
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Sun May 01, 2011 5:01 pm

    Not good with C4Dz at all, don't know about adjustment effects, and as for the fonts everytime I search for them on google I get the same sites.
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Shadow on Sun May 01, 2011 5:36 pm

    Like the text but needs lil blurring.

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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by BERKAY on Sun May 01, 2011 6:35 pm

    You forgot to use this effect for that flower at left and somewhere upside. Also there is not a focal point about lightning and sharpening. KIU Wink
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Wed May 04, 2011 6:05 am

    Latest sig, tell me what you think. I used the same abstract tutorial as Wiseman:

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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Noctis on Wed May 04, 2011 7:47 am

    awesome work

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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by BERKAY on Wed May 04, 2011 6:00 pm

    Too big text and light need fix. You can make text just a little smaller and fix your lightning. You can create a black filled layer and with a soft white brush, brush where you want light. Then low opacity of layer. Wink
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by TheWiseman on Wed May 04, 2011 6:45 pm

    BERKAY wrote:Too big text and light need fix. You can make text just a little smaller and fix your lightning. You can create a black filled layer and with a soft white brush, brush where you want light. Then low opacity of layer. Wink

    I agree. Small text = good text. Or at least relatively small. With this I like to use a decent sized render that will take up at least half the canvas by itself. Maybe a third depending on what the final result is supposed to look like.

    As for the lighting suggestion I found adjustment layers to be good for this unless you want the lighting applied to only one layer. Layer -> Adjustment Layer. This allows you to adjust which areas of the canvas receive the adjustment too. Same technique though, but easier to manage IMO.
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Paradox on Wed May 04, 2011 7:18 pm

    bad font, bad bg, and bad blending of render and bg :/
    need of lot work imo :3
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Sun May 08, 2011 10:34 pm

    My latest work:



    It's my 2nd time ever using C4D's, so plz rate and comment.
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Paradox on Sun May 08, 2011 10:40 pm

    work without font some time, until you get other parts good >.<
    bad render quality, and effect overlapping render, NEVER! Smile
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Supreme_King on Sun May 08, 2011 10:58 pm

    I like the background, but the render is a bit dotted, as if it was over-sharpened. Also the text is in a too high contrast with everything, I suggest using a clipping mask on the font layer with a copy of the entire sig inside the masked layer to get similar colors.




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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Sun May 08, 2011 11:56 pm

    After editing it, here's the result:



    I unsharpened the render and made the text smaller, but that's the most I could do without having to start all over.

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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by BERKAY on Mon May 09, 2011 2:12 pm

    Better now. However just low opacity of Lens Flare there. Smile KIU
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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by Supreme_King on Mon May 09, 2011 9:57 pm

    I agree with BERKAY on the lens flare, they tend to cover the render a bit.




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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by LegendaryFrost on Mon May 16, 2011 8:09 pm

    My two latest:




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    Re: Frost's North Pole Gallery(Right Across from Santa's Workshop)

    Post by BERKAY on Tue May 17, 2011 12:49 pm

    You should fix your gamma perfection. I mean lightning. Some adjustments like Exposure exist for this. Catch perfection via other PSDs. I mean search some good PSDs like Anzo's one since he always use Exposure. Smile

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